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Wednesday 20 November 2013

Peace Poem

For the past few weeks we have been focusing on Peace this is my definite and confirmed peace poem
I hope you enjoy reading my story

            

Laughing out loud,
not caring if there’s a crowd
Laughing out loud
Hard to be quiet.
Maybe we should try it
Laughing out loud
Does it matter if its a special date.
Rolling On The Floor Laughing
laughing so hard
Our laughs heard afar
Rolling on the floor laughing
Is it just an expression?
Well I do it every day no confession
Rolling on the floor laughing,
because thats how we roll
wink !wink!
What is mine
will define.
That I want peace
sprouting between the trees.






Tic Tac Toe - Analysing


For Reading this week we analysed a text and we were each given a different part of the text to analyse. 


Thursday 14 November 2013

Mavis Peace Poem


In class throughout the week we wrote poems and created raps. As a group we made a rap called "If You Drink And Drive" a topic given to us by our teacher but influenced by the truth of the reckless results of drinking and driving. 
For my individual poem I wrote the poem below
NONE OF THE POEM BELOW WAS COPIED CREATED AND INSPIRED BY MY OWN MIND, IF THERE IS A POEM SIMILAR TO THIS 

In the breezes of the street
defining the term free
It’ll come to be
what we want is peace


In the path of the sun
lays what’s done.
The past’s craft
the futures draft.

While the blood is red
with the war creating dead.
people losing their heads
cannot rest on their beds.

Enjoy the hours,
the sun setting with the flowers.
As rain pours down
creating showers.


Fall and Die
leaving someone to cry
death never lies
so no one denies
don’t fear death
fear being alive.
but peace is what we realise

What is mine
will define.
That I want peace
sprouting between the trees.




Wednesday 13 November 2013

Manaiakalani Movie Trailer

Click play to view the trailer of the movies our school have made for the Manaiakalani Film Festival this year. 


 
Manaiakalani Film Festival Trailer - Tamaki Primary School Movies from Tamaki Primary on Vimeo.